>DING< A Light Bulb

Hello there alliance. I invite everyone to read something I did a long time ago. I wrote this story about 8 years ago and I haven't done much to it since.

http://www.geocities.com/guildmot/index.html

Here's the thing. I'm still writing a few things for college and I'm writing a couple things for friends and this forum. My mind is still racing and I need something else to do to take my mind off of school.

Here's the idea, I want to know if I should fix my younger years gramer mistakes and finish the story. I am willing to put three names in the story based of your in game charecters.

Names will be figured out after poll.

To Be Continued...

I'm not gonna lie and say it's a good story...... Cause i think it's a WOW story!!
You see, I don't read that often because I get bored too easilly , but when a story makes me wanna read it....well then it's a nice story

Nice twist
Father killed mother thing, lol

Ohhlala, he got girlfriend
"...,driving his imagination to the brink of madness with the desire to kiss the perfect design of her luscious lips." nice

There are bullies, lol
ooo, and he's learning from being beaten up

ooo, he strong at puberty

", or so he thought… " oooo nice

WOW!!
Only read the prologue thou, but it sounds reeaaal nice

And YES YES fix it

I will read more as time flows by

Thank you Indis, if you like some of those parts from the prologue you should read the rest. alot happens in only 4 chapters.